Peter Mckeller? Yeah that'll make her swoon.
I tried to find abandoned in a different language. but Google failed me.
forlatt. nilar. verlate. <------------------ Those are
worse than Mckeller.
worse than Mckeller.
Abandoned because that's how I feel.
Abandoned Because that's what you did to me.
And maybe this blog will win you back.
But maybe it won't.
Maybe if I write a thousand sappy poems, and tell you how your eyes twinkle when you stand before a crowd and your brows furrow when you take a test, then you'll remember that my eyes twinkle when I see YOU and my brows furrow when you explain to me for the 5th time why this 'just couldn't work.'
So who cares if there's not time or if the money ran dry
or if that even sounded poetic.
Here I am.
And at least I'm trying.
I feel like i've heard these words a thousand times but hearing them from you makes so much more sense. Thanks for writing this, you're great.
ReplyDeleteProbably one of my favorites. If not my favorite.
ReplyDeleteI can read this post a thousand times. Just amazing.
ReplyDeleteI tried to find a name that meant "abandoned" because I was curious but I failed just like google. (Diggory means "lost one", just by the way. Personally I like your name better.)
ReplyDeleteThis is just a really lame way to say I like your writing.
I'm always really bad at pin pointing things I like in writing, so I hope you don't think I'm the worst when I just say: Hey, I really liked this.
ReplyDeleteThis is the challenge (the pin pointing).
DeleteNice to meet you Pete. rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'll be seeing you around.
stop it...too good.
ReplyDeletebut I mean please don't stop it ever
ReplyDeleteYou're all champs.
ReplyDeleteLove.
ReplyDelete"Here I am, and at least I'm trying" Words of a true spoken hero. Thank you.
ReplyDelete"So who cares if there's not time or if the money ran dry
ReplyDeleteor if that even sounded poetic."
quality line
quality post
"And at least I'm trying"
ReplyDeleteRight?
hit home a couple times. loved this line "maybe if i write a thousand sappy poems"
ReplyDeleteThis is genius. This is everything I'm feeling right now.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful
ReplyDelete#top5