(and Truth be told I ain't lying. When you see my face hope it gives you ... sorry)
"Tell me my hair looks fine
"it does"
Tell me I look good in these pants
"you do"
What do you think of this outfit?
"I think you look great in everything"
Don't be stupid, really does this look fine?
"I'm telling you the truth."
I've never told you anything but the truth, you know that.
So don't yell at me when you ask "is it fine to take a break?" and I tell the truth.
No I'm not fine with an empty chair at family game night. I'm not fine playing Scrabble alone.
No I'm not fine giving my jersey to my sister because no one else wants to wear it.
No I'm not fine looking for our hidden nickels at Kneaders alone.
No I'm not fine when I can't use the word 'adventure' and no one understands why.
No I'm not fine when you say "we'll see if things work out" or "Sorry, I've got a date tonight"
I don't want his grubby, unworthy hands anywhere near your delicate waist.
And I don't want your arm wrapped around his waste either.
I'm only telling you the truth, you once told me you liked that.
My heart just died in a good way.
ReplyDeleteIt's scary how exactly I relate to this:
ReplyDelete"No I'm not fine with an empty chair at family game night."
"His waste" that's great. I'm loving your stuff.
ReplyDeleteLoved this.... Your writing has a really great tone to it.... :D I like how personal it was. keep it up!
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
ReplyDeleteyou are my favorite (already). so clear, so real.
ReplyDeleteI hope you win in the end.
ReplyDeleteWow. "I'm only telling you the truth. You once told me you liked that." #stolen
ReplyDeleteSo powerful. This is awesome.
Me too Luigi, me too.
ReplyDeleteWow. This was perfect. So real.
ReplyDeletedang peter. dang. i like the word delicate. a lot. you seem like a person i want to be friends with.
ReplyDeletegood work peter.
I don't think I've ever related to a post so much as I do right now. My heart was just opened up and put into words and pasted onto your blog.
ReplyDeleteThis is so amazing. You really capture the emotion and put it on the page, pure and plain. Loved the end with hands and waists. I can relate. Best of Luck to you Peter.
ReplyDeleteIs that a drake lyric for your title? anyways, i love this post. so real.
ReplyDeleteOh no! all American rejects!
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